literature

planet x 'secrets'

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i travel in circulation,
monotone distance,
with a sun in between
(let me tell you a secret,
that i am a new planet
sent from afar)
blurring colors together
like a polychromous sky
lining my phantasm
(another secret is that i
fly out of orbit
gravity still can't capture me)
imagining my secret soul
between myself and my dream
so we connect once,
(one more secret for you:
if gravity cannot catch me,
neither can you.)
in a faraway land,
called planet x
where we are God.
So there are 3 ways to read this;

1. Read it all as one
2. Read the un-parentheses together (without the parentheses
3. Read only that in parentheses.

yeah... as you can tell I was bored.
and this is utopia.
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blindingnights's avatar
Were you reading E.E. Cummings?